in the sarah jane script they make a script so that the camera man and the director know where to focus on GILL closes on the vault door - it's massive, the kind of thing they'd keep gold bullion in. She strokes the door - almost reverential.
Gill then takes the disc and fits it into a recess clearly made for it.
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It begins to door.
revolve. Lights begin to come on around the door
this is showing the camera were to focus and what not to focus on if the director likes what he sees then he knows that the audience will like.
I like the way you have used an example from the script to make your point. You need to relate your point to how it is going to affect the way you write your script.
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