movie collage

the plot: in this movie Kami played by Kamran Hussain is a drug dealer that had a bad childhood but then when some dosent pay him for his drugs he gets really angry zak played by Zakir Hussain owes Kami 100k so zak has to get kami his money

zak breaks in to zahaibs locker and steals all his money and zahaib gets angry because zak had betraid him.

zak pays kami off and then zak gets killed by zahaib and Asadullah and Kami walks away with a lot of money

log

log: my role was an actor my role was too be a theif and i was going to rob a bank but asad said it was too risky so we rob a school. we havent done that much work we only have a scene when me and asad walk out of prison and asad says were free.

today we have done a lot of work 

research

primary research consists in research to collect original primary data. It is often undertaken after the researcher has gained some insight into the issue by collecting secondary data. This can be through numerous forms, including questionnaires, direct observation and telephone interviews amongst others.

primary
does facebook have a negative affect on our english skills?

we have created a survey to see how many people use facebook and how often they use it

we will interview with our peers who use facebook to see what they think

how often do you go facebook?

how many friends do you have on fackebook?


Secondary
research facebook and other social networks too see how language is used

stephen fry
bbc article
webpages

music: Damien Marley welcome to Jamrock

Location: Sidney stringer academy

script

ext. cold road
just zak and kamran on the road 

set in a quite road no one is on the road in the day time. 

Kami in his 20s
\is wearing a black baseball cap with a black batman t-shirt, black jeans and a black pair of Adidas trainers.  

Zakir is wearin blue casual jeans and a purple shirt

Zakir walks down the road and Kamran spots him

kamran

wheres my money?

Zak

what money?

kamran
10000 you borrowed of me

Zak

i aint got your money!

kamran
for the drugs,

ill give you 24 hours to get all my money or else...

Asad who is 18 is wearing a black pair of jeans with a black top and black shoes
Zahaib 29 is wearing Casual black jenas with a black t-shirt and black shoes.

ext. zahaib zakir and asadullah are walking to zahaibs locker were there is 10000 in a bag which he has been saving since he was little int shot.

Zahaib:

dont tell no one my combination for my locker

Asadullah:

dont worry im not like that

Zak: 

errrmm yeah dont worry i wont tell any one

Zahiab: 

im serious i got 7000 in this locker and i only trust you two

 ext shot. 10 minutes later zak returns he goes in to zahaibs locker and robs all the money

asad and zahaib return to his locker

Zahaib opens the locker

zahaib

 were is my money

Asad: 

theres only 3 people that know the combination me you and zak i was with you all day so it cant be me so its zak lets go check the security camera

asad and zahaib walk to the room
asad
i knew it was him, lets have a little chat with him
(takes out a gun from his inside pocket

ext. zak meets kamran at the top of a car park

kamran:

you got my money

zak: 

yeah i got your money

kamran: 

thats a good girl now pass me the money and you can chip home

 zak:
here take your money

zak hands the money over to kamran

Kamran drive off

45mins later Zahaib and asad see zak int shot.

zahaib: 

wheres my money

zak:

what money

asad: 

the money you took from his locker

zak: 

i aint touched that money

asad

were not stupid you know exactly what were talking about

asad gets his gun out and shoots zak in the leg

asad

 so where is it

zak

kamis got the money

zahaib

where is he?

zak

hes gone home with the money

Asad gets the gun and shoots zak in the head 

 Asad and zahaib walk to kamis house

Zahaib: i heard this guy is a maniac he killed a guy with one hand 

Asad: yes its true i saw it with my own eyes

Zahaib: there he is 

inc. Asad and Zahaib slowly walk up to him more nervous then ever 

Kami: what you 2 want?

Asad:

we just came to get our money back 

Zahaib:

the money that zak robbed from my locker

kam:

where is zak

asad:

hes dead, i shot him 

zahaib:

so if you wanna get shot i suggest you give the money

kami:

are you threatnig me, ok tomorrow

 Asad: you aint going to give it 

 Kami: your so cleva (laughs evily )

zahaib: give me the money

Kami:how about no

asad: shoot him zahaib

Kami pulls out a gun from behind his back and shoots both of them in the head.

The End

Genre: Action,Thriller

Title: Does facebook have an impact on our English skills

purpose:to decide whether it has an impact or not

Audience: Teenagers 14-19

Outline Proposal
We are going to research and find out whether or not Facebook has a negative impact on people's English skills. We will do this by researching and finding any facts and interviewing Facebook users and asking them if their English skills have improved or got worse. We will be interviewing teenagers around the ages of 14-19 and asking them how often they use Facebook and if it has affected their English in any sort of way. we chose this topic because we wanted to try something difficult so we will check the people who have facebook and check there school work and check the work of the people who dont have a facebook

pros
Easy to sign up
easy to communicate with people all around the world
any one can sign up


cons

Hard to find someone who has not got a facebook account

Primary research: to interview the people who have go a facebook account

secondary research: to research facebook to see how language is used.


Research
Links to websites that we have found for research
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Facebook
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/educationnews/8142721/Social-networking-teachers-blame-Facebook-and-Twitter-for-pupils-poor-grades.html

differrent camera angles by Kamran hussain

1. Handheld shot - EXT.NARROW ROAD.DAY

2. Medium shot - EXT.ROAD.EVENING

3. Closeup shot - INT.ROOM.DAY?

4. Tracking shot - EXT.OUTSIDE.DAY

5. Aerial shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY

6. Tracking shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY

7. Swish pan - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY

8. Aerial shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY

9. Tracking shot - EXT.PLAYGROUND.DAY

1minute of the short movie has been analysed, the bold writing means its in the same place.

The shooting script research

in the sarah jane script they make a script so that the camera man and the director know where to focus on GILL closes on the vault door - it's massive, the kind of thing they'd keep gold bullion in. She strokes the door - almost reverential.
Gill then takes the disc and fits it into a recess clearly made for it.
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5
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It begins to door.
revolve. Lights begin to come on around the door

this is showing the camera were to focus and what not to focus on if the director likes what he sees then he knows that the audience will like.